Finally some COLOUR!! I LIKE!! the background is super cool.. can stil be worked a lil more.. specially the yellow upar se...
I dont really understand the characters so not commenting on that but since u have a logic and explanation for it.. so its cool!
the chick (Ranjitha character- whtever the name is) and the niwesh dude.. hair treatment can be better!!! and ur soo good at it!! i know tis is done in a hurry JLT. but since u WANT COMMENTS.. here it is! Tumhare character ka hand/arm proportion is a lil wierd..
1st of all- colors!!! good u'v started workin on ur weak areas.ur character's lower bosy shud hav been showing thodi si..dhyan se dekho..its missin there.niwesh's grey shirt ke pass there's empty space..hey n is dat gal ranjitha..i remember u tellin me that d hair is lyk smbody else...
Finally some COLOUR!!
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the background is super cool.. can stil be worked a lil more.. specially the yellow upar se...
I dont really understand the characters so not commenting on that but since u have a logic and explanation for it.. so its cool!
the chick (Ranjitha character- whtever the name is) and the niwesh dude.. hair treatment can be better!!! and ur soo good at it!! i know tis is done in a hurry JLT. but since u WANT COMMENTS.. here it is!
Tumhare character ka hand/arm proportion is a lil wierd..
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U might wanna check the date???
1st of all- colors!!! good u'v started workin on ur weak areas.ur character's lower bosy shud hav been showing thodi si..dhyan se dekho..its missin there.niwesh's grey shirt ke pass there's empty space..hey n is dat gal ranjitha..i remember u tellin me that d hair is lyk smbody else...
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